Girl meets world fanfiction car accident
This is my first chapter of my first story that I'm writing. I'm really nervous, and I hope you guys like this chapter. Constructive criticisms is appreciated, but please no hate comments. Feel free to rate and let me know what you guys think of my first chapter. Lucas could hear the uncertainty in her voice, so he felt like he should re-assure her.
Hi guys. No one is probably reading this, but I hope you like it. Right before the car accident, Maya risked her life to save me. When she saw the car and she knew we couldn't stop, she unbuckled her seat belt and climbed on top of me.
She was trying to shield me from the impact. I read that note thing and I don't except that you put your own feelings over mine. Now get off of me," I said.
I tried to push her off, but she wouldn't. It was too late. The car wasn't in flames luckily. I was completely unharmed, but Maya wasn't. Her body took most of the impact, so her head only had a scratch on it from the glass. She wouldn't wake up, so something had happen to her head than, I thought to myself.
Lucas and my father got out of the car. I did too, carrying Maya with me. Nothing's wrong with me, but there is something wrong with Maya, she won't wake up," I said. I stared at Lucas as he tried to wake Maya up. I saw that nothing was wrong with him as well as my father. They just had a few scratches and bruises. I looked at my wrist. It still hurt. I didn't notice the pain when I was carrying Maya out.
It must have been the adrenalin. I looked down at my wrist. It was swelling, but it didn't matter. I said, "Why are you worrying about my wrist. I hear the ambulance right now. We need to focus on getting Maya back to safety.
The ambulance finally got here and drove all of us to the hospital. They put Maya in surgery. I only knew one person that would say that would call Maya "baby girl". Gosh she is brave," her mother said. I smiled at her. She did look like Maya. It made me sad to look at her. Right when I was about to say something, Josh came running in. I need to see her!
Maya's mom was looking at him with a confused look. Why did this happen to her? I was explaining to him what had happen. He had the same look as Maya's mom had earlier. They knew she was brave. I saw Farkle come in and said, "Farkle, I'm so glad you're here," I said to him. I ran straight to him and hugged him. I really needed a friend, not a friend that I liked, I needed a real friend. I held on to him for about a minute. I didn't realize it, but I was crying. I was fine that Farkle was hugging Riley.
I wasn't fine with it happening too long. I was about to break them apart, but I saw Riley crying. I knew this wasn't some crush hug, it was a "I need a friend hug". I just let them be. I didn't look at them though; it still hurt to see Riley in pain. I was thinking about the car accident. Maya had said something about a note. I looked over at Riley again. She had stopped crying.
I continued, "Maya had said something about a note. What was in that note? I respected her privacy, but if it was that important not to tell anyone, I needed to know sooner or later. I looked over at the doctor walking toward us. You're friend or daughter has successfully made it through surgery. She had most of her ribs broken, plus her foot, but the broken looked like it had happened before the accident.
Maya is in coma as you already know, but we will have to release her in 2 months," Dr. Powan said. I looked straight to Riley. Her eyes were tearing up. I was about to walk over there to hug her, but Mr. Matthews put his hand over my chest to stop me. Friar, Riley needs to be with her family right now," Mr. Matthews said. Farkle had heard that, too. He just stayed seated. I had to watch her cry again. I turned away, not to see any tear touch the ground. It was hurting me. I couldn't give Riley hope that Maya would wake up because of what Ms.
Hart had told me. Hart's exact words were, "Don't tell Riley what I'm about to tell you because it will leave her broken. The doctor told me that if the patient doesn't wake up two weeks before the two months, the chance of her waking up is very slim.
I couldn't tell her that Maya would probably not be on this earth in two weeks. Story Story Writer Forum Community. When Riley and her friends find out about their problems.
V Right before the car accident, Maya risked her life to save me. It's time someone returns the favor," she said.
I will shield you, Maya, you're my best friend. Dad asked with him. I felt scared that I had to tell her it was my fault. Hart, Maya risked her life trying to save me," I said not looking into Maya's mom's eyes. Hart asked. Hart nodded. Lucas P. V I was fine that Farkle was hugging Riley. One month and two weeks later "She still hasn't woken up! Chapter 1 2. Chapter 2 3. Chapter 3 4. Chapter 4 5. Chapter 5 6.
Authors note: Warning, horrific car crash. Some gore. I do not own anything, not the characters, the prayer Topanga says. All the conditions, hospitals, codes, procedures, locations are real.
I'll go home. She was furious at Riley. Just because she straightened out her hair and wore nice clothes that Shawn bought her every now and then didn't mean she was Riley Matthews 2. What Maya didn't see was a red truck.
Gotta new laptop for Christmas so might be updating more regularly. So here's the next chapter, enjoy He has six broken ribs and also four bruised ribs. Just then, Alan walked into the kitchen with Mr Feeny and lent his some rope for his garden before noticing that his wife was crying. Cory's been in a car accident and we need to go to New York. I know Cory would appreciate it? Mr Feeny couldn't imagine Cory like Amy had described.
It had started off as a normal day. I was on the train headed to me and my best friend, Maya's favorite store, Demolition. I was sitting on the bench, waiting for my stop while looking through the pictures on my phone. Probably half of them were pictures of me and Maya, goofing around. I smiled as I flipped through them, trying to think of what to get her for her upcoming birthday.
Hi guys. No one is probably reading this, but I hope you like it. Right before the car accident, Maya risked her life to save me.
Remember send in prompts until May 27 th. And as always Enjoy! Prompt: From gmwfanforlife — Can you do one where there is a car crash with the core four and Riley fights to survive and stay alive? And long please.
Hey guys. I'm so happy you all enjoyed the first chapter and gave me so many reviews. You inspired me to write more and I couldn't stop so today, I present to you chapter two. Thank you guys for following and favoriting. For those who haven't, please do. I'm sure you won't regret it.